hmmm...deep...nice flow...weak vocabs tho...and just a suggestion..it would be better if u address it to the readers with more description specifically and not in general...dont take this the wrong way...i liked it and it would be better if u put a little rhyme scheme but all in all it was aiight...and nice line breaks too..keeponit

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