Thread: 10 line story
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Old 04-05-03, 08:48 AM   #8
unifire
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it was aight man, it was good for a 2min piece, but i know u can do ALOT better.. i aint gona put u down for how shortness of it cause that was the point of it.. but elaborate on vocab..
keep spittin, lookin foward to seein some more of your stuff
peace out...
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