Ya Mama's Favorite
From: The east-side of Da D (Detroit) |
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This was aiight, like somebody said earlier you get your point across, and some time people get cought up in punchlines and metaphors that they miss the fuckin point completely tryin to be sweet. But you could benifit from some more pizzaz in the verse to keep in fresh. You'll pick that up if you keep at it, Keep spittin'
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