Thanx for the replies. This is my first full length song so im sure ill get better cuz i wanna start writen more. but i think that peepz get to caught up in the way rhymin is supposed to be to make it good. then the straight love for rhymin that comez from the heart.
idk maybe not, maybe its juss me, but i think that if you have feeling in you then your words will show that, not all the "textbook" way of rhymin.