Do I wanna be Eminem—not in this lifetime//
I just do me—grab a mic—and let my self rhyme//

that shit was ill.
now u said be real so this is my opinion. The topic was ok
the flow wasnt great, but thats cuz your rhyme structure came off weird. it didnt really have any consistancy to it. There is def feeling behind those words and i like that. but u gotta have a consistant flow wid it, otherwise its more poetry then rhymin.
juss my opinion dawg, but i was still feelin tha piece.
keep dispersin