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our lable reads ' the smoothest, cleanest smoke you can buy
that's just illusion, really reading, if you smoke me you'll die
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haha, Aiight, I read it and I laughed, and then I was like 'funny, true...wow'...
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addictive additives we added gives us market advantages
this year we'll show a million more to death, and the advantage is?
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Mutha fucka! Did you win the tourny?!?! ...Should'av...
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its sad, it took me dying twice to feel a cigerette's pain
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God...Damn, magnifcent.
This piece made me hate you (not
you, but the person who you were writing as, the Cigarette Company Guy).
It made me want to praise you (the writer this time lol).
I'm not good at giving advice or anything...Only advice I can give is write, best thing to do, best way to improve. All I can really say other than that is this was great.