read the first 4 lines and stopped....that stopp and start bullshit makin no sense....its annoyin to read this type of shit......ya rhymin for the sake of rhymin not givin a damn if one statement has shit to do wit the others....its fuckin retarted...
ex.
"spinin motionless saw KIDS SCARED, Serpents serve as my SERVENTS..
cruize the block in the SUB URBAN, i touch minds like brain SURGEONS"

aight first off how can u spin motionless.....second.......whats the point of sayin u got kids scared and serphants as servents in the same line then follow it up talkin bout cruizin a burban.......shits jus stupid