sup man?
Yo man, I wasn't feeling this too much... I mean it's nothing too original, but it's real... so I respect that... I never think a verse a bout streets is wack unless it's just about guns and shit...
You're putting a point across here... I'm feeling that... you do have skill, but this verse could have been alot better... it had decent flow... it was bit on and off sometimes though... this was fairly short... but the point was taken, ya know...
a bit simple sometimes with the vocab and all... but not too simple... shit was straight man...

peace