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Old 04-06-03, 07:33 PM   #11
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the line
yo dog is your pen leakin or did your quil spit?
..cuz your lyrics are lookin sloppy like lesbian arm pits
The breakdown

i liked the wordplay but the line won't reallythat hot. Could've been better u know.


the line

yo nigga dont be scared, i aint gonna kill you just leave you in a wheel chair//11
And maybe get my Pitbull to rip out your pubic hair, then i'll lock you under the stairs//12


i was lovin thosetwo right there wordplay punches consistency was there.
emoney ur verse wa wordplayful but it jus din attract me

quil u had wordplay insome lies but punches was mediocre.

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