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U couldn't spit Clean if you was usin Listerine
Ok Dat Line is played out like a mufucka but it's actually better than any line u posted in dat verse up there
Try bein more creative with punchlines!!!!
Dont do no simple shit like
I slize you from the dick up to the head/
cause you're dumb and wack/
but now I squash that shit/
anyway you're not able to beat it/
I mean wat da fuck iz dat??!!!!
in those 4 LITTLE lines you used 4 LITTLE WORDZ and didn't even RHYME!!!
head,wack,shit,and beat it
atleast use werdz dat a 1st grader isn't able to use
Try usin multies 2
becuz when you use multies it makes your verse look more attractive and it also improves your FLOW!!
aight man
~`UnO`~
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