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deacon dont take this the wrong way cuz its juss my opinion but i think you mos def have the writing skillz, but u try to hard to fallow the structure of how it should be, and dont put enough emotion into it. I personally would prefer a oiece that had lil vocab and poor rhyme structure but had feeling and emotion to the vice versa
i wasnt really feelin it srry dawg.
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