thanks for the feedback yall...with the rhyming thing,yeah i know osme of the shit dont rhyme,but i mean not every line has to rhyme,my accent and my voice fills nin on a couple of them tha tyou wouldn tpick up on when your eading,but i more into gettign something out...but thats what cats get me on co zi dont go back over my shit...anyway,thanks for feedback yall...

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