I Am The Light
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IP:
I wasn't really into this piece for a couple reasons..
1) They depart from the light my soul torn apart
No deception no deceit no lies all discreet
I feel just these two lines ruined the whole poem- I will also say the rest of the poem does not stay strong--
shouldn't proceed
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