Lyricali- You Too Involved With other Shit when Battlin Him....
Its Like You were talkin about soemthing else except battlin.....
Work on Punchlines... You had a few in there.. Just none that would really grab anyones attention...... Nice flow though...
You would really have "sight Rights" if you concetrated more on punchlines and wordplay.... Notice everyone of Mind theory's Lines have sometime of wordplay in em.... Thats wut you need as welll as alot of others including mYself.. Fillers are boring and take away from the whole battle effect.....

Mind-
Nice usage of words as usual....
My vote- mind theory