as everyone else said this was tight. ya flow was straight and the topic really well handled. sum good imagery in there.

She won`t listen, their speeches slur together,
because to her, they just ramble nonsense until she feels better

tight 2 bars that, really understood wat u were saying. only thing maybe you could o is up ya vocab a bit but its still tight wivout it so wateva.

ANYWAY RETURN THE FAVOUR CHECK MINE BANGKOK BUSINESS