strong, straight forward piece...had it's moments of power..

..but i felt at times a bit too elaborate, with the flow not on par as much as they could've been...

..i still think it was a nice enohgh piece...but not good enohgh to go through when comparingf to other pieces...

..still, i hope ya do go through....as you got potential there...and you said you worked hard on it...

..Vote: DOES NOT go through