This was well put...

...strong, structured fairly well...and good imagery....

...but also at times blunt, with a slightrly disrupted flow....

...it was a toss up between you and linez drawn...but i had to go with Linez Drawn, as i liked his approach to the topic and the overall execution (apart from how he ended it)..

..Vote: DOES NOT go through..


(anyway, you got enough votes to go through, probably)...