Yo... Hum... how can I start this...


Um... Lyric... hum... punches... minimal...
wordplay blah... flow was there some..?

3.5 out of 10...


Mind... punches... BLAH... wordplay minimal... ok flow...

4 out of 10...
this may indeed be the worst verse I've seen from you... Stop quotin shit... if the reader can't get it... they don't get it... don't do that bullshit... takes away from the verse... and as far as I'm concerned... takes away the creativity... as well as drops your point total...