Thread: you aint shit/ headfuck
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Old 04-08-03, 09:21 AM   #8
Shadow God
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Okay...You want critque.
Your vocab expandance was average.
Flow was off on First Verse.
Second Verse was constant.
Rhyme Scheme was on point.
Overall-Good spit.
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