Ayo man, that shit was prety tight right? haha. My favorite line was
-You think you spit correct cause you visit spell check...Unintellictual faggot, I'll rip ya garmental rap into confetti specs.

Haha that shit was tight. Could have been longer. And I loved the flow, it's similar to mine. That was decent though, nice vocab, nice flow, No real metaphores but they wern't needed the flow and the vocab made up for it. Real nice shit. Stay up kid. PeaCe
~Out