nice spit rhombus,i got the topic straight off,like the loft part of the first verse,i thoguht maybe the scond verse was a little off the topic of the first,but maybe htats the way you wanted it i dont know,i dont know why people are on about the if its keyed or not shit,it dont matta,just coz you got som e nice vocab in there dont mean you cant write shit like that without having to go back,shit was tight rhombus,liked it alot..peep mey shit sometime in open mice...
bismillah