shit yo that was ill,deepness,good topic to write on,shit like that been overlooked for money topics now,shits sad,bout time people started writng shit about shit that noone wants to admit happens,shit gets in your face mad nicely...props...peep my shit on open mic sometime,lookin for feedback on that....

so this is my letter to you dad I'm fleeting
and still I stand, it takes a boy to be a daddy
and a father to be a man.... I Hate You

excellent ending,liked it.