^votes dont count.

Tik's scale of grade:

Metaphors:
i didnt really see any, and if i did they werent made clear. poorly done in the metaphorical sence.

Imagery:
mediocre, use more discriptive, gripping words to grab my attention.

Originality/Style:
poor, i did not see a real point to this poem. you took it and talked directly about your shadow not trying to disguise a hidden meaning, therefore being very blunt and straight forward, unoriginal. your style kinda through me off at the begginning with the three lines that all rhymed off the same word, and then switched to the two lines. very confusing and hard to read along to, i never saw a flow.

Overall:
You need elevation. You have some good ideas but need to write themfirst and then revise fixing little mistakes. Try to be deep.
On a scale of 1-10 id have to rank it an 4.5

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