Sick work dude, this rhyme gives me a good impression of this place on my first post. First off, it flowed really well, I could almost hear the beat behind it if I read it out loud. All the multis fit together and there didn't seem to be many forced rhymes. There were one or two lines that didn't rhyme with anything, but the bars all fit together and it took my mind off that.
It was nice man, real nice.
Peace

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