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ROFLMAO..
Don't You Just Love It When Kids Don't Understand A Word And Have To Use Dictionary.com And Try To Prove They're Smarter Than You..?
Tha Point To This Is That...It Was Actually A Typo...I Must Have Missed It All Those Months Ago.. "Deficiant"..I Bet You Don't Even Know What It Means..
So If You Not Gonna Leave Something Productive, Don't Freepost In My Thread.
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LMFAO! So true.. I felt as though as it were a typo and .... lol, too funny man,
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Beyond Tha Mirror Ignorance Breathes Souls In This Metropolis..
Adults Act In Verbal And Physical Abuse Against Their Foster Kids..
Lost In Tha Mist Of Human Rights They'd Rather Choose To Fight..
Against Their Own Bloodline Untill Their Eyes Are An Immoral Sight..
Tha Vagrant Vacate And Congest Tha Sidewalk Seeking For Pittance..
First Place To Look If You Have A Child Thats Run Off And Is Missing..
Pestilence And Famine, Hobos Hungry For Another Drive By Shooting..
How This State Of Emergency Rose Is Senseless And Highly Confusing..
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Probably my favortive lines out of the entire piece man, flow was straight and had troubles going off balance, vocab was aight, nothing too spetacular
, you can sorta tell that this piece is a bit different from your older piece due to it's lack of complexity you have now and the typos...heh, Overall this piece was solid around all edges, I likes...
love...