yeah youve definetly elevtedsinc i last peeped your post,jus ton ething id like to mention,youve got some real nicw words you can be using in there but throwing them away for smaller ones,ex.
ill pop you like a haystack...that line id follow with something rhyming with haystack,not vicous,...and this one,spittin words at your dimension,i thoughtj this was a tight line right there,but agian you misused it with the word you on the next line,i thnk dimension is jsut an ill word to start off with for osme reason,try using these bigger words your leaving out in your rhymes,itd be heaps mad sounding and alot nicer,but no biggie im just pointin out,tryin to help an all,keep spittin an delevate your already on your way...bismillah
salaam aleh koom