sucked? you gon' elaborate on that... man, thas a bullshit reply right there... yo I didn't think I sucked, just like that.... but it wasn't really tight or nothing...
See, it's mad simple... with the rhymes and vocab... concept was something new... I've never read any piece touching on that... I think you should have gon' more into depth on this... and should have tried harder to add more skill to it... like with the vocab, rhymes and flow... but this probably not the best you can do.... sound just like a simple freestyle....

Peace