beat is aight...not really feelin it but nice......aight yo ya flow was on and off at points...and u stretched ya words too much.....here some advice......write ur track wit tha beat,so u'll be on beat wit ur shit....and keep practicing it before u record that way u don't have to keep reading off tha paper so much....and change up ur voice a lil bit,spice tha track up....tha beat breaks at points where u can like switch up ya voice......and add a lil emotion in ur rhymes yo....it's important to feel tha track that ur doing,otherwise u won't be satified.....but yo overall this was a nice lil track....if u just started then don't take nuttin tha wrong way,u got time yo...i'm just givin u tha advice peeps gave me.......listen to other artist like Fab or especially Pac,watch how he changes his voice and shows emotion and feels his tracks

good drop

~KroniK~