aight i see that you're a new mc so you got time to work but check it there is alot of work for you to improove on such as complexcity, vocab, flow, you need to uppin your skills alot now i''m not tryin to diss i'm just doin you a favor unlike must cats on this site, but baby girll listen to what you're gonna say before you say it, think hard and if you can't say "that's the illest shit i've heard then think more on it.

keep doin what you're doin and get better

odd gives this
1/2 mic of 5 for effort

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun