oh please don't mistake me for a newbie i used to be on this site every day until i joined the army but that's not the point this is you wrote way to fuckin much for i mean damn we understood that you don't like this cat but why so much on the motha fuckin diss i really don't think you had to put down so much but fuck it you had me from the start and almost to the end i couldn't finish the shit too long for my taste there isn't too much crit i give can give you except if you shortin the lines so the flow of the spit is better understood or maybe you just spit fast i don't now, you could also throw in some multies to spice it up a little, but other than that this shit was hot

odd gives it
5 of 5 mics

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun