suicidal moose, this is a lot better than your last one, which was about a line and a half long. Try to keep your rhymes flowing, and work on some punchlines. You've improved a lot though.

logikal, you're an okay MC but you keep repeating yourself. Every battle I see you say the same crap about you not having to try, and how they'll never win. You have to score a punch in there somewhere, because without that its just rhyming trash talk. Whats the point of a bark if you have no bite?

vote=moose
good improvement

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