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Old 04-10-03, 11:35 PM   #10
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oK. I'M GOIng to vote just to show you why J-Diesel won.

Criminal Intent:

the only way that u seein bars is if u was a killer//
i got more punchlines against this cat then chicken on sunday dinner//

All i can say is you need harder punches than this ^^^^^^ to win batttles. (No disrespect).

This:

im a rap fiend on the sene so be prepared//
dog the ony "diesel" on you is the "jeans" u wear//

was alright. But you can't talk about your self in a battle. I.E> the first line.

J-Diesel:

I'm ill, speakin of evil mah sequell is ill-legal ill rip out ya hair and call you the blad-eagle..// 8
maybe this will knock ya sensless ass back to reality., with this brutal fatality..//9
u'll be jeopardize ur mom life and fucking, kidnap ya wife and kidz, then put my knife ta wigz, so i'm really splittin hairz,// 10
And U ask me did i really give a fuck when i split ur wigz, now u really gettin scared//11
hold up Criminal Intent don't call ur mom yet cuz my last line will Hit u in ya chest and ya breathing gets-impaired, and ya gasping choking, cuz tha gats-im-toatin leave ya ass-jus-smokin// 12

Mass amount of multi's ran through this verse and this part flowed well. The puches weren't all that hard but still better then Criminals.

Vote: J-Diesel
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