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Old 04-11-03, 09:35 PM   #12
G.Hod
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wow.. Quite one-side, despite the attempts of Jay's partners in crime to dig up dirt on MT's verse..

Mind Theory's Highlights:
"You claim I'm chicken, but I'll smash your birdseed hen-flows with my info/
You act hard, but you're Microsoft, so in battles with you I Windows// (win-those)"
NICE WORDPLAY, A RARITY THESE DAYS..

"You ain't STANDABLE, as my verses tear through flesh like a cannibal/
YO!! . . . ^Jay Pana^, you're wack kid . . . but that's under STANDABLE . . . // "
HA HA HA, COMICAL, MY BOY.. UNBELIEVABLE WORDPLAY AND PUNCH IN ONE.. PERHAPS THE TWO-LINER OF THIS FORUM SO FAR..

These were only a few of abundant examples of all devices of writing which clearly won the battle for you..

JayPana's Highlights:
"Walking Outside With Spandex Iz Tha Only Way He'd Come Out Tight..."
DECENT PUNCH, I IMAGINE..

"LIke Neutral ATomz, Hiz Flow Never Producez Energy...
If Rankz Were Based On Wackness He'd Alwayz Be Ahead Of Me..."
VERY GOOD, SHOWS INTELLIGENCE..


However, I think the size length (or lack thereof) of you piece did come back to JayPana, even though he doesn't want anybody to say it.. Mind Theory had more quality punches, a consistent flow, better multi's and captivating wordplay.. JayPana did take the vocabulary, though..

The creativity is what seperated the two.. Mind Theory's ideas were all new and fresh, as opposed to basic punchlines seen from Jay.. I look forward to reading more from both in the future.

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