Yo Trill, shit is on point, you're gettin the message across well, fuck its long for a song man haha, best line of the song:

I aint no psychic but here’s my next prediction,
90% of what yaw emcees spittin is fiction.

That was straight up to the point dogg, nice work but I reckon you need to reword or shorten to song to have it fit in tight in a song...By the way Atetrack, there's plenty more of that talent comin out from Aussie, just check the K.I Roster.....

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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