yea i gotta say i seen more played punches in mind theorys verse than ever. the stop line was creative though. jaypanas flow was off but his punches were better i felt. he had more personals and his punchlines and complexity was better.
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It's like bombing Iraqi muslims the way that I kill the wraps (raps)/
You contain wackness in your veins . . . plus you're a hemophiliac//
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nice, decent
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Your verses byte so much, that my computer can't hold 'em/
While my punchlines stay connecting waaay quicker then Cable Modems!//
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played whack and not a punch anyway
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It must have been a loooong fall when you dropped the bars that I quoted/ ^^^
Because that shit was soooo WACK, you must of been high as fuck when you wrote it!//
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that wasn't a solid punch
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You got more bitch in you than bitches themselves . . . how can it be??/
My verse will lock you down with pressure, and make you frantically key//
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filler
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You claim I'm chicken, but I'll smash your birdseed hen-flows with my info/ lol
You act hard, but you're Microsoft, so in battles with you I Windows// (win-those)
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birdseed shit was funny but the microsoft line was played
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Jay Pana is the true definition of the American Fag/
My punches leave more stars circling your head then the American Flag!//
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played whack
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You ain't STANDABLE, as my verses tear through flesh like a cannibal/
YO!! . . . ^Jay Pana^, you're wack kid . . . but that's under STANDABLE . . . //
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creative but weak punch creative though
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I put you down so much, the grounds fed up, 'cause your rhymes are dirt cheap/
Sticks and stones may break my bones . . . but your words couldn't hurt fleas . . . //
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decent
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I'll mash your rhymes like potatoes . . . with gravy on top . . ./
I'll even write this line in red, hoping that maybe you'll STOP//
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broke rules here but creative still
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My lines will leave you violated, it'll hurt worse then the dick/
You must digest your bars before you drop them, 'cause all ur verses are shit!!//
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very old
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I'll fire punchlines that blind your sight . . . without looking/
The only time your verse is raw is when I eat it . . . without cooking//
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say raw then say the definition... nuthin special...
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No more kiddie games, either face the Truth-or-Dare to get hurt/
You know I'm ill, you're stalling like horses cause you're scared to spit first//
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these "ur scared to spit first" lines neva have any effect cut their played filler
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Thats aight, whether I spit first or second, you're filled with fear/
Your spit's like the creator of this league, because ya Skillz dissappeared!//
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lol, good
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You claim you spit sick, but its more like you're choked with Ebola/
When it comes to winning battles, I'm "Always . . ." like Coca-Cola//
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finisher fell off
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His Flow Iz Dumb And Simple Like Retardz Eating Instant Rice...
In Hiz Mind He'z Ill But In Theory He'z No Where Near Nice...
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lol, that was a sic punch
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He'z A Heavy Weight By Hiz Post Count But Hiz Punchez Are Light...
Walking Outside With Spandex Iz Tha Only Way He'd Come Out Tight...
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solid wordplay, punch
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Hiz Versez Are Like Novelz, Long But Are Never Bestsellerz...
Hiz Audioz Put Me To Sleep, It'z Sad Cuz He Won't Get Any Better...
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punch but nothin real good
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He Thinkz He'z Popular Cuz Hiz Battle Last Week Wuz Viewed Tha Most...
It Wuz Mainly Him, Tha Word Uppin Wuz More Than Half Of Tha Postz...
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nice research coulda landed harder if worded betta but solid
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Hiz Flow Iz Intolerable, It'z Almost Like A Catastrophe...
Everytime I Listen To Him I Think I'm In A Tragedy...
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eh... whew boy this line fell off
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LIke Neutral ATomz, Hiz Flow Never Producez Energy...
If Rankz Were Based On Wackness He'd Alwayz Be Ahead Of Me...
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punch
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His Skill Iz Fake, It'z Nothing But An Act...
I Thought He Wuz Gangsta 'Til He Said Bustin Ninez Wuz A Math Fact...
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that shit was hilarious, lol
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He Claimz Hiz Versez Sizzle But It'z Still Getting Cold...
Hiz Punchez Are Like Burnt Out Candlez, They're Used And Old...
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border line feedin here... decent though
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Hiz Chancez Are Diminished Like Tha End Of Hussein'z Reign...
Treat Him LIke Def Jam Did To Murder Inc., He'z Singin In Tha Rain...
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WOAAA that shit was sic, that really tipped the scale for me. Best punch in the battle.
For those that dont kno, Def Jam kicked Murder Inc out their building in atlanta.
Good Battle For Both, Seen Both Come Better Though...
vote - jaypana less filla more punches
creativity - mind theory
complexity - pana
personals - pana
punchlines - pana