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Old 04-13-03, 01:53 PM   #5
Narcicyst
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it was aight...like girly up there said as long as you gettin shit off your chest its aight...i'm an asshole critic so heres my criticism...you coulda made your word scheme better and used more complexity in your lines...and try making your lines longer....keep elevating dunny...one
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