heres mine

Ima hit your verse with my lyrical assult,
take ur breath away like a bank robber locked in the vault,
the cop yelled "freeze" and shot ya with "novocain",
thats why ur verse got no "feelin" like uv never known-no-pain,
ur vocab was on heard of, u got the "book" skills of a "worm",
and just like an "old dog" theres no way ull ever "learn",
for some1 who likes "comic" books your really not "funny",
you had "diarreah" of the mouth, cuz all ur sentences were "runny",
your "uncommenly" "sencless" and "extraordinaly" "bland",
your run over like the corner store that couldnt meet demand,
u like a girl commin off the pill ur "spottin" tha best,
like the ADD kid in school, couldny concentrate on my test,
while you act "cool as ice" your startin to slip,
like the junky on the ledge, you had a "bad trip". (acid trip)

aiight lets see the votes