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Old 04-13-03, 06:41 PM   #18
Jay Pana
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..::Playin With Words Part I :Personal Punchlines::..
'Da Lyrical Whiz' Tryin 2 Have '1/4th' of-My-Skill, Suckin d!ck like a DeMONIC Alien Reachin For my '200-Dollar-Bill' (ooooooooh)
U Tryin 2 b a 'Funny Head' But U Givin 'SKull-too-a-Joker', Lemme Blow up Your brain Simular Like tha Long-of-a-Smoker **

^here'z an example of u breakin a rule...u made ur verse stand out with tha quotationz...u aren't suppossed to do that.
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