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Old 04-13-03, 10:02 PM   #7
12cent hooligan
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how can tha magician make a rabbit dissapear,
if he's never seen the rabbit cuz hes typin on here,


I like those lines a lot
u have great vocabulary and knowledge
and the flow was good for this piece, it only fell a couple a times
it could have used some punches just to break the
sound and make parts stand out
I give it a 7 outta 10

PS return the favor on my "The Lonely Mic"
thx
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