that was a dope piece i liked it but wasnt feelin it quite as much as the other ones..........still dam good
this was favourite lines

and maybee next time youll see the warning signs, of a young husband and father who'll take his own life, lookin down the barrel of a gun, do i have the guts, no if ands or buts i do but do i have bulluts[bullets] so i check twice, to ensure itll take my life, aim between my eyes

i agree though it coulda done with havin dashes to show ends of bars etc but its cool