i dunno wat to say that hasnt already been said. pre-written or keystyle this is incredible. U got a good head and serious u should use it to get u urself sumwhere in this game. ya vocab was tight and ya flow was themes were heavy. U rappin in an OZ accent? hope so cos it ruins things if u dont do it in ur own accent ya kno wah i mean.
anyway cuz return the favour and check mine and Jonny6feet's collab (i kno i said i wasnt up on collabs but we from the same city, merseyside so we just kicked a couple of verses)