I for one thought it was an interesting veiw point, had no rhyming and I would say it was more of a story than a poem but nevertheless it was a good ending. When I saw this I thought of the book they read you in fifth grade (the wolf's side of it) but it's got a twist which was interesting and I liked the way you explained it at the end, it was a little tedious because everyone knew the story and I was searching for the elements that made it a poem but it was a good peice, the twist made this peice tho'