wtf... damn girl, you need to get laid.. come up to toronto, I'll hook you up.. lol.. j/k, as far as a rhyme goes it was pretty good,

"driving faster towards the goal.. loving every bit
squeezing out emotions never going to quite
orgasmic sweats break out of pores
nails driving down the doors"
^ pretty descriptive.. lol

I liked it, should be longer tho

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