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Old 04-16-03, 07:29 PM   #3
varentao
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Aye, like you were bursting to 'comprehend' the emotions you were feeling, but didn't know you were feeling in a way..confusion..

...i think the explanation like thingy at the start could've been incorporated into the poem itself..but still, fairly well done...

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