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Old 04-17-03, 11:57 AM   #7
Soul Theory
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em took this this easy with wayyyy better punches. and he had metas and a lil wordplay.

The only reason you think you hot is because u got no fans

Kid- I’m about to put your words and your sole in touch…cuz with your foot in your mouth your ass won’t be talking much/

NICE^

overall nice verse unemceeable, just work on wording some of ur punches better so they will hit harder.

BLunt-MC. your verse was kind of childish. especially talkin bout moms and stuff, i was expectin this to be a closer battle. work on constructin metas and try to get off the mom and guns topics.



good battle y'all.



me vs. bribeone1:: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=39493
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