not bad.. I've seen way better.. but not bad.. I liked some of the multies you had, but others didn't go with the flow too well..
you started the rhyme really tight..
His outrageous thoughts, rage in phrases that amazes gods//
Contagious bars, engraved in faces, what the cases caught//
Disgraced n scarred by what they brought wit a graceful art//

but didn't end it too well

As you look to the heavens n see throats erupt in praise//
Metaphors he borrows from the depths of God's tourso//
Stays packed like Warsaw, he did it coz he thought so//

^ that didn't flow at all really...

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