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Old 04-17-03, 04:05 PM   #6
shiznit
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Re: Simple Love ~ Poem

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Originally posted by [*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ]

Im longing for the day ~ that im in your arms,
when everything is perfect & calm \
But now, you are far away,
if i had one wish ~ it would of been that you stayed /
But i loved you enough to watch you go,
knowing these five months are going to go slow,
even if you did ask if you should of stayed i would of said no,
as in this time apart ~ our love will grow \





i like this part...but yeah i agree...need to up with the vocab and try to be more descriptive..not that its a bad thing but over all i like it...i can relate ...ive been in long distance relationship before and my man was like 3 hours away...we tried to work things out but it didnt work out....well keep doin ur thang gurll.....keep em commin
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