nice job....short and simple..nice vocabs but like what other said...seperate ur piece by line..cuz it would be more attractive to the reader..its just that when u see a paragraph like this..others would be too lazy to read such a long one so if they are divided by stanzas it would be really much better....but yeh.keep up

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