due, i str8 loved this ryhme, i know u may have posted for feed back, not to hear how much everyone loved it so ill critisize, fuck server, hes tryin to get a rise

felt tha the 3rd transition of the ryhme:

centre of attention in cyphers i get the crowd hype
i always survive, it's my job to keep the party live
like every emcee i live and breathe for the rhyme

fell of a bit but needless, good ryhme