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Old 04-18-03, 04:50 PM   #2
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"I'm expressing my emotions in a rhyming form/
And yes it's no lie on June 30th I was born/

7 pounds 7 ounces of awaiting attention/
But my parents dismissed me and put me in a life of detention"

Shit was deep man, no doubt, I liked this one... a bit long... but it had rhythm and it flowed pretty good so it kept me reading...
I'd say this is just a bit above average... oh I liked most of the wordplay too...

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